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No poetry was written,
No fairytales were read.
As if it was forbidden,
By the monsters in her head.
And all they thought was silly,
Was quickly thrown away.
By a girl who had to grow up,
By a girl who couldn't play.

All her dreams and fantasies,
All her fears and hopes.
Thrown in a bag of garbage,
Balloons and skipping ropes.
The teddybears and puzzles,
All had to retreat.
For new puzzles in her head,
She never would complete.

No poetry was written,
No fairytales were told.
Her eyes spoke of a sad tale,
Her hands were always cold.
She thought of no white horses,
For she was no princess.
Her life was about papers,
And secret loneliness

All her dreams and fantasies,
Would never come true now.
For she had forsaken them,
Without knowing how.
Remember how happy she was.
She doesn't even know.
The little girl she used to be,
Was forgotten long ago.
©2005-2009 ~eowyntje
:iconeowyntje:

Author's Comments

yes, this is poetry, lol. At least I hope its worthy of the name :P

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:iconjustaminute:
So sad :( I think it is very well written though :hug:

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:iconeowyntje:
thanks :hug:

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No matter what they think
or what they do,
No matter what they feel
Or what they see in you,
You're gonna get there,
Whatever they say,
And nobody's going to stand,
in the way
:iconagterhoek:
"The teddybears and puzzles,
All had to retreat.
For new puzzles in her head,
She never would complete."
Beautiful, a pair of lines which creates the atmosphere very realistic. Fav!

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Next to me is just the cold
My ears hear the silence unfold
My skin feels the wrinkles growing
My tears are sowing
The seed once put
Somewhere deep down
If someone finds me
Dont make a sound
:iconeowyntje:
:) bedankt, k vond dat zelf niet zo'n sterk stukje maar dat schatte ik misschien verkeerd in. bedankt voor de favorite :D

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No matter what they think
or what they do,
No matter what they feel
Or what they see in you,
You're gonna get there,
Whatever they say,
And nobody's going to stand,
in the way
:iconagterhoek:
alsteblaftsk :D

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Next to me is just the cold
My ears hear the silence unfold
My skin feels the wrinkles growing
My tears are sowing
The seed once put
Somewhere deep down
If someone finds me
Dont make a sound
:icongolightly5150:
closed the book before "happily ever after." nice structure in your poem.

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:iconyourwickedclown:
"No poetry was written,
No fairytales were told.
Het eyes spoke of a sad tale,
Her hands were always cold."

Describes growing up quite well...
But really, who want's to grow up?
:iconeowyntje:
yeah, I wrote this about the tragedy of growing up.

--
No matter what they think
or what they do,
No matter what they feel
Or what they see in you,
You're gonna get there,
Whatever they say,
And nobody's going to stand,
in the way
:iconx-lostfairy-x:
it's awesome!!! i really like it! xx
:iconeowyntje:
thanks, I'm glad you do. :)

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No matter what they think
or what they do,
No matter what they feel
Or what they see in you,
You're gonna get there,
Whatever they say,
And nobody's going to stand,
in the way

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